Writing Your World Week 3 Video 10 - Giving feedback on Ada’s paragraph
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2019-06-01
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This video focuses on Ada's paragraph construction. The video starts by recapping the sentence structure for the paragraphs. It then defines Ada's writing style and goes on to explain her use of personal narratives to support her ideas. The video then analyses Ada's sentence by sentence. It points out the strength and weakness in her sentences. The video then shows her sentences and paragraphs could be re-arranged. There is a focus on the flow and coherence within the paragraphs. The video then discusses how Ada can improve her writing. This is video 10/12 in week 3 of the Writing your World course.
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Nomdo, G. 2019. Writing Your World Week 3 Video 10 - Giving feedback on Ada’s paragraph. [MOOC]. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37901