Browsing by Subject "cohesion"

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    Writing Your World Week 3 Video 10 - Giving feedback on Ada’s paragraph
    (2019-06-01) Nomdo, Gideon
    This video focuses on Ada's paragraph construction. The video starts by recapping the sentence structure for the paragraphs. It then defines Ada's writing style and goes on to explain her use of personal narratives to support her ideas. The video then analyses Ada's sentence by sentence. It points out the strength and weakness in her sentences. The video then shows her sentences and paragraphs could be re-arranged. There is a focus on the flow and coherence within the paragraphs. The video then discusses how Ada can improve her writing. This is video 10/12 in week 3 of the Writing your World course.
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    Writing Your World Week 3 Video 8 - Coherence and cohesion
    (2019-06-01) Nomdo, Gideon; Hunma, Aditi
    This video focuses on the importance of ensuring that there is coherence and cohesion in the written work. The video explains the role of coherence within an essay. It also explains how coherence can be achieved at a sentence level and a paragraph level. The video then discusses the role of cohesion in an essay. Examples of cohesion are then provided. It also discusses how coherence and cohesion are essential for an argument to hold. The video then provides examples of coherence and cohesion being used in paragraphs. This is video 8/12 in week 3 of the Writing your World course.