Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft

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dc.contributor.authorNomdo, Gideon
dc.contributor.authorHunma, Aditi
dc.date.accessioned2023-05-13T11:06:48Z
dc.date.available2023-05-13T11:06:48Z
dc.date.issued2019-06-01
dc.description.abstractThe video focuses on analysing Ziggy's essay draft. The video analyses Ziggy's argument in the introduction and points out where it has improved. It also discusses where he could have strengthened his introduction with regards to where his position overlaps with Woodward's. The video then discusses Ziggy's ability to find a link multiple ideas between authors and between various themes. The video then discusses Ziggy's conclusion and whether he is effective in summarise the ideas in his essay. It also touches on opportunities missed by Ziggy to strengthen his argument. The video then discusses the improvement in Ziggy's essay and the management of resources using the reference list. This is video 5/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course.en_US
dc.identifier.apacitationNomdo, G., & Hunma, A. (2019). Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft [MOOC]. Retrieved from http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37909en_ZA
dc.identifier.chicagocitationNomdo, Gideon, and Aditi Hunma. "MOOC Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft," 2019. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37909en_ZA
dc.identifier.citationNomdo, G. & Hunma, A. 2019. <i>Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft</i>. [MOOC]. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37909en_ZA
dc.identifier.ris TY - MOOC AU - Nomdo, Gideon AU - Hunma, Aditi AB - The video focuses on analysing Ziggy's essay draft. The video analyses Ziggy's argument in the introduction and points out where it has improved. It also discusses where he could have strengthened his introduction with regards to where his position overlaps with Woodward's. The video then discusses Ziggy's ability to find a link multiple ideas between authors and between various themes. The video then discusses Ziggy's conclusion and whether he is effective in summarise the ideas in his essay. It also touches on opportunities missed by Ziggy to strengthen his argument. The video then discusses the improvement in Ziggy's essay and the management of resources using the reference list. This is video 5/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course. DA - 2019-06-01 DB - OpenUCT DP - University of Cape Town KW - fixed identity KW - cross-border migration KW - coherent argument KW - xenophobia LK - https://open.uct.ac.za PY - 2019 T1 - Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft TI - Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft UR - http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37909 ER - en_ZA
dc.identifier.urihttp://hdl.handle.net/11427/37909
dc.identifier.vancouvercitationNomdo G, Hunma A. <i>Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft</i>. [MOOC]. ,Centre for Higher Education Development ,ADP: Writing Centre, provided on 2023-05-13T11:06:48Z. [cited yyyy month dd]. Available from: http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37909en_ZA
dc.language.isoenen_US
dc.publisher.departmentADP: Writing Centreen_US
dc.publisher.facultyCentre for Higher Education Developmenten_US
dc.rights.urihttp://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/en_US
dc.subjectfixed identityen_US
dc.subjectcross-border migrationen_US
dc.subjectcoherent argumenten_US
dc.subjectxenophobiaen_US
dc.titleWriting Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draften_US
dc.typeMOOCen_US
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