Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft
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2019-06-01
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The video focuses on analysing Ziggy's essay draft. The video analyses Ziggy's argument in the introduction and points out where it has improved. It also discusses where he could have strengthened his introduction with regards to where his position overlaps with Woodward's. The video then discusses Ziggy's ability to find a link multiple ideas between authors and between various themes. The video then discusses Ziggy's conclusion and whether he is effective in summarise the ideas in his essay. It also touches on opportunities missed by Ziggy to strengthen his argument. The video then discusses the improvement in Ziggy's essay and the management of resources using the reference list. This is video 5/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course.
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Nomdo, G. & Hunma, A. 2019. Writing Your World Week 4 Video 5 - Giving feedback on Ziggy's draft. [MOOC]. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37909