Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft

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dc.contributor.authorNomdo, Gideon
dc.contributor.authorHunma, Aditi
dc.date.accessioned2023-05-13T11:06:33Z
dc.date.available2023-05-13T11:06:33Z
dc.date.issued2019-06-01
dc.description.abstractThis video focuses on analysing Joey's essay. It starts off by analysing Joey's introduction and how it has improved from the original drafts. The video shows how Joey is able to reinforcing the position he has taken by linking multiple themes. The video then focuses on the paragraphs and conclusion. It critiques the length of the conclusion and some of the weaknesses in the conclusion. The video then looks at how he has managed the resources using in-text referencing and the reference list. This is video 6/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course.en_US
dc.identifier.apacitationNomdo, G., & Hunma, A. (2019). Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft [MOOC]. Retrieved from http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37907en_ZA
dc.identifier.chicagocitationNomdo, Gideon, and Aditi Hunma. "MOOC Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft," 2019. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37907en_ZA
dc.identifier.citationNomdo, G. & Hunma, A. 2019. <i>Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft</i>. [MOOC]. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37907en_ZA
dc.identifier.ris TY - MOOC AU - Nomdo, Gideon AU - Hunma, Aditi AB - This video focuses on analysing Joey's essay. It starts off by analysing Joey's introduction and how it has improved from the original drafts. The video shows how Joey is able to reinforcing the position he has taken by linking multiple themes. The video then focuses on the paragraphs and conclusion. It critiques the length of the conclusion and some of the weaknesses in the conclusion. The video then looks at how he has managed the resources using in-text referencing and the reference list. This is video 6/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course. DA - 2019-06-01 DB - OpenUCT DP - University of Cape Town KW - identity construction KW - cross-border migration KW - homophobia LK - https://open.uct.ac.za PY - 2019 T1 - Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft TI - Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft UR - http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37907 ER - en_ZA
dc.identifier.urihttp://hdl.handle.net/11427/37907
dc.identifier.vancouvercitationNomdo G, Hunma A. <i>Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft</i>. [MOOC]. ,Centre for Higher Education Development ,ADP: Writing Centre, provided on 2023-05-13T11:06:33Z. [cited yyyy month dd]. Available from: http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37907en_ZA
dc.language.isoenen_US
dc.publisher.departmentADP: Writing Centreen_US
dc.publisher.facultyCentre for Higher Education Developmenten_US
dc.rights.urihttp://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/en_US
dc.subjectidentity constructionen_US
dc.subjectcross-border migrationen_US
dc.subjecthomophobiaen_US
dc.titleWriting Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draften_US
dc.typeMOOCen_US
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