Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft
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2019-06-01
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This video focuses on analysing Joey's essay. It starts off by analysing Joey's introduction and how it has improved from the original drafts. The video shows how Joey is able to reinforcing the position he has taken by linking multiple themes. The video then focuses on the paragraphs and conclusion. It critiques the length of the conclusion and some of the weaknesses in the conclusion. The video then looks at how he has managed the resources using in-text referencing and the reference list. This is video 6/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course.
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Nomdo, G. & Hunma, A. 2019. Writing Your World Week 4 Video 6 - Giving feedback on Joey's draft. [MOOC]. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37907