Writing Your World Week 4 Video 7 - Giving feedback on Ada's draft
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2019-06-01
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This video focuses on analysing Ada's essay. It the effective use of elaboration through examples in the introduction. It also touches on Ada's use of sources and how she might rectify the lack of continuity. The video also touches on Ada's use of reference and how she is able to achieve coherence by using linking words. The video then provides ways in which Ada can improve her essays and what she has done well. This is video 7/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course.
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Nomdo, G. & Hunma, A. 2019. Writing Your World Week 4 Video 7 - Giving feedback on Ada's draft. [MOOC]. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37908