Writing Your World Week 3 Video 12 - Giving feedback on Joey's paragraphs

MOOC

2019-06-01

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http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37904
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Wr-3-Paragraphs Joey.mp4 (234.25 MB)
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Nomdo, Gideon
Hunma, Aditi
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ADP: Writing Centre
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Centre for Higher Education Development
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Abstract
This video focuses on Joey's paragraph construction. The video describes how Joey makes use of topic sentences in the first paragraph. It then goes on to discuss how Joey could have improved the first paragraph. It also touches on the various themes included in Joey's paragraphs. His use of readings is also analysed and built upon. The video then discusses his use of specific readings in the second paragraph and then points the strength in Joey's writing. This is video 12/12 in week 3 of the Writing your World course.
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border crossing
marginalized
identity construction
identity fluidity

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Nomdo, G. & Hunma, A. 2019. Writing Your World Week 3 Video 12 - Giving feedback on Joey's paragraphs. [MOOC]. http://hdl.handle.net/11427/37904

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