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    Writing Your World Week 2 Video 9 - Giving Feedback on Introductions
    (2019-06-01) Hunma, Aditi; Nomdo, Gideon
    This video focuses on providing feedbacks for the students' introduction. It discusses how the introductions differ depending on individual markers of identities. The video then reviews each introduction individually. It discusses how the authors make use of their readings and personal experiences to structure their essays. The video provides improvements on how to align a statement with the author's viewpoints. The video also touches on starting off with a broad context requires the definition of key terms. The video then goes on to summarise the introductions of the students' and the improvements that they can make. This is video 9/10 in week 2 of the Writing your World course.
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    Writing Your World Week 4 Video 7 - Giving feedback on Ada's draft
    (2019-06-01) Nomdo, Gideon; Hunma, Aditi
    This video focuses on analysing Ada's essay. It the effective use of elaboration through examples in the introduction. It also touches on Ada's use of sources and how she might rectify the lack of continuity. The video also touches on Ada's use of reference and how she is able to achieve coherence by using linking words. The video then provides ways in which Ada can improve her essays and what she has done well. This is video 7/7 in week 4 of the Writing your World course.