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    Writing Your World Week 3 Video 11 - Giving feedback on Ziggy’s paragraph
    (2019-06-01) Nomdo, Gideon; Hunma, Aditi
    This video focuses on Ziggy's paragraph construction. The video restates how Ziggy introduced identity in his introduction. The video then discusses how Ziggy uses his Zulu identity, migration and South Africa's history shaped his identity in the first paragraph. In the second paragraph, Ziggy then looks more broadly at the global context. The video discusses what Ziggy has done correctly and incorrectly when it comes to sentence structure. The video then discusses how to strengthen arguments and provide links between different sections in the paragraph. The video then lays out what Ziggy has done well and where he could improve in his paragraphs. This is video 11/12 in week 3 of the Writing your World course.